In a world of second-guessing
uncertainty
your eyes, darkened by shadows, peer out
at a barely-recognizable homeland
is it really a home?
trust is torn apart by claws of hatred and
thrown among the despairing
there is no welcome mat here
There is only fear
a thick slime left behind in the footprints of our shadows
a smell thick enough to taste
an orange light penetrating our dreams
But keep your heart with me
and Ill try to be your refuge
you can hear the birdsong where I cannot
and its because of you
that I can keep smiling















Comments
otherwise its good :]
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Never apologize for showing feeling. When you do so, you apologize for the truth.
~Benjamin Disraeli
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I haven't lost my mind; I know exactly where I left it.
"13 pi over 6 does not equal pi over 6. It's just kind of one of those 'duh' things."
-Dr. Harnett during Math Analysis
huh
anyway, i was gona say i like everythin except the use of 'thick' 2x so closely in the second stanza
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Never apologize for showing feeling. When you do so, you apologize for the truth.
~Benjamin Disraeli
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I haven't lost my mind; I know exactly where I left it.
"13 pi over 6 does not equal pi over 6. It's just kind of one of those 'duh' things."
-Dr. Harnett during Math Analysis
hmm i hadn't noticed that until just now. i think i might leave it only because it takes you back to the whole slime thing, and that's what i want. but thanks for pointing it out
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I haven't lost my mind; I know exactly where I left it.
"13 pi over 6 does not equal pi over 6. It's just kind of one of those 'duh' things."
-Dr. Harnett during Math Analysis
im glad i helped
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Never apologize for showing feeling. When you do so, you apologize for the truth.
~Benjamin Disraeli
--
I haven't lost my mind; I know exactly where I left it.
"13 pi over 6 does not equal pi over 6. It's just kind of one of those 'duh' things."
-Dr. Harnett during Math Analysis
aww thx
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Never apologize for showing feeling. When you do so, you apologize for the truth.
~Benjamin Disraeli
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